And then you get those damned Mumakil, and the whole feel of the battle starts to collapse. I don't think PJ handles battles that well, and the way he chops and changes the sequence of the events around the charge loses things.
There's other places where he plays fast and loose with the timing, but the whole death and glory feel of the Second Charge has been thrown away.
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Date: 2004-02-01 03:24 pm (UTC)There's other places where he plays fast and loose with the timing, but the whole death and glory feel of the Second Charge has been thrown away.